It may break the bond, tearing the pages of trust!
Be still my tongue, for i know not what to say,
It may break the silence, igniting the fuse of chaos!
Be still my mind, for i know not what to think,
It may break the secrecy, shattering the world apart!
Be still my soul, for i know not what to believe
It may break the limit, mincing the crux of existence!
Submitted as part of Jingle’s Thursday Poets Rally Week 38
lovely expressed sentiments,
ReplyDeleteHappy Rally.
you have to make abut 18 comments ...
Thanks for the contribution.
My pleasure ji... have done 18+ :)
ReplyDeletevery religiously inclined write but nice! here's my wk 38.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/i-cant-hold-it/
ReplyDeleteNicely penned - thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteHere is my first rally entry:
http://beccagivens.wordpress.com/2011/02/15/unconscious-to-guides/
Awesome! :)
ReplyDeleteloved the emotions captured through your poem.. :)
thank you arpit :)
ReplyDeleteMe Likes :)
ReplyDeletelovely. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteLoved it :-)
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing...
Love this, well done!
ReplyDeletebe still-
ReplyDeleteis it possible!?
(not for me...)
http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2011/02/16/sonnet-ix/
better be still as otherwise it seems all might come undone...nicely played...
ReplyDeleteAwww..very deep and emotional. Nice.
ReplyDeleteOh maaaaaaaaaaannn...awesome!! I hear ya, D... cuz I can really relate to this one!! And I keep my heart the same thing too.. whheeww...
ReplyDeleteSo perfectly written!! Kudos!!