Friday, February 18, 2011

Be Still

Be still my heart, for i know not whom to love,
It may break the bond,  tearing the pages of trust!
 
Be still my tongue, for i know not what to say,
It may break the silence, igniting the fuse of chaos!

Be still my mind, for i know not what to think,
It may break the secrecy, shattering the world apart!

Be still my soul, for i know not what to believe
It may break the limit, mincing the crux of existence!






Submitted as part of Jingle’s Thursday Poets Rally Week 38

14 comments:

  1. lovely expressed sentiments,

    Happy Rally.

    you have to make abut 18 comments ...

    Thanks for the contribution.

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  2. My pleasure ji... have done 18+ :)

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  3. Anonymous8:53 AM GMT+4

    very religiously inclined write but nice! here's my wk 38.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/i-cant-hold-it/

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  4. Nicely penned - thank you for sharing.

    Here is my first rally entry:
    http://beccagivens.wordpress.com/2011/02/15/unconscious-to-guides/

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  5. Awesome! :)
    loved the emotions captured through your poem.. :)

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  6. Anonymous8:40 PM GMT+4

    lovely. Thanks for sharing.

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  7. Anonymous5:05 AM GMT+4

    Loved it :-)
    thanks for sharing...

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  8. Anonymous9:04 PM GMT+4

    Love this, well done!

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  9. Anonymous7:08 PM GMT+4

    be still-
    is it possible!?
    (not for me...)
    http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2011/02/16/sonnet-ix/

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  10. better be still as otherwise it seems all might come undone...nicely played...

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  11. Awww..very deep and emotional. Nice.

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  12. Oh maaaaaaaaaaannn...awesome!! I hear ya, D... cuz I can really relate to this one!! And I keep my heart the same thing too.. whheeww...

    So perfectly written!! Kudos!!

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